The following information will help us take our notecards and begin to organize that information into a rough outline and thesis statement.

 

Use these websites for some thoughts and rules about outlining:

See what others have to say about the outlining process ...

http://owl.english.purdue.edu/workshops/hypertext/ResearchW/outline.html

Some helpful advice on creating an outline in easy to understand language... http://www.myschoolonline.com/page/0,1871,47839-108765-51-13337,00.html
Outline format described...

http://writingcenter.mcc.edu/Outlining.pdf

http://rwc.hunter.cuny.edu/reading-writing/on-line/standard.html

http://www.twingroves.district96.k12.il.us/ScienceInternet/MakingOutline.html

http://www.mta.ca/faculty/arts/music/academics/guides/styleguide/outline.html

Sample outline for literary devices used in Romeo and Juliet

http://www.lawrence.org/lhs/english/Summer%20Reading/outline.htm

 

Having trouble with your thesis? http://ozline.com/electraguide/thesis.html
Essay Map - Another Method to Outline Your Essay http://www.readwritethink.org/materials/essaymap/
Interactive Outlining Tool http://interactives.mped.org/view_interactive.aspx?id=722&title

Another useful outlining tool - works as both a graphic organizer AND a with the click of a button - creates a traditional outline!

We will be using the Inspiration program on our desktop for our initial outlining. To navigate between the website and Inspiration, just minimize this webpage and click on the Inspiration icon on the desktop.

The following tips are just to get you started.

1. When you first open Inspiration, you will see this screen. You are ready to start your outline - just type in your topic!

2. Once you have your topic in the main idea bubble, you should begin to think about your keywords. Your keywords will probably be a good indication of your supporting paragraphs.

Move your cursor to an area below the main idea. You will see a light-gray crosshatch. Leave your pointer at the crosshatch and begin typing in the keyword for your first body paragraph.

 

3. Continue adding your body paragraphs.

4. It's time to make links between your main idea and your keywords.

Go to the toolbar and click the link icon.

Click on your main idea. Then go to your body paragraph and click on that bubble. Magic! Your ideas are now linked!

Do the same for all body paragraphs.

5. They might not be as neatly arranged as you would like. Click on the icon next to >Link< - the >Arrange< icon.

6. The Arrange Diagram Box appears. You will probably want to >Clean Up< your diagram in a >Top Down Tree<.

Click OK.

7. Now for the OUTLINE!

On the same menu bar - click on >Outline<.

8. You are now in Outline view.

9. You can now decide which View you would prefer to continue to work in. You can always move back and forth between the views.

III. Some practice before you start on your own outline!

1. Take a look at the beginning of this outline...

(This is an Inspiration file; click 'Open' on the dialogue box to view the file. Minimize the screen when you are finished.)

The topic is in the top bubble; the body paragraphs are below; the supporting details for the first body paragraph are linked to the body paragraph bubble.

Click on the >Outline< icon and view it in Outline form.

 

Influence of Ballantyne's Coral Island on Golding's Lord of the Flies

2. Next, use this paragraph and complete the supporting details for the paragraph on 'similar characters'.

(You will get a printed version in class to reduce your having to juggle between the two screens.)

Essay excerpt: Outline paragraph – Similar characters

In Coral Island, three boys are shipwrecked on an unidentified Pacific island – Ralph Rover, the 15-year-old narrator; Jack Martin, “a tall strapping broad-shouldered youth of 18, with a handsome, good-humoured firm face” and Peterkin Gay, “little, quick, funny, decidedly mischievous and about 14 years old”. The lads live in “uninterrupted harmony and happiness”. At the end of the novel, just as the boys think they will be devoured by savages, they are released into the hands of their teacher who announces “through the great goodness of God you are free!” The natives embrace Christianity, and all is well. Golding’s protagonists are also named Ralph and Jack; Peterkin becomes the overweight Piggy. Simon is an independent creation, although Golding has claimed that Simon was inspired by Peterkin, perhaps suggesting that the name of Peterkin is linked to that of Simon Peter of the New Testament – two names deriving from one. Along with numerous other boys ranging in age from six to 12, they are abandoned on a South Sea Island after being evacuated from Britain during a nuclear war. However, there is no “uninterrupted harmony and happiness” on Golding’s coral island, but anarchy, chaos and murder.


http://www.learn.co.uk/default.asp?WCI=Unit&WCU=2621

3. Check your work! Does your outline look similar to this one? You will have to scroll along the bottom to see the whole diagram. Switch to outline view for an easier comparison.  (this is an Inspiration file) 'similar characters' sample outline

 

IV. You are now ready to start your own outline. Decide which view you would prefer to work in. Remember, you can always check your work in either format. In Diagram view, remember to arrange your diagram after you have entered new information.

Refer to your packet for additional information on outlining.

Some final thoughts:

you've chosen your topic
you know what you want to say about your topic
the outline step will help you organize what you want to say
this is a working outline
it is a plan for your paper
it will change as your research and writing progresses
it will help you go from the pile of notecards to writing your paper

 

For more information on the Inspiration program go to: http://inspiration.com/home.cfm

Created by: Sue Erichsen - February 2004 - email at: serichsen@lakelandschools.org
Last updated on: February 15, 2007

 

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